Under The Skin
Under The SkinSix feet of blue-black death was how the snakeappeared to him, through eyes of dread that day.The snake and he were shocked to meet; awaketo threat both stopped and froze. Did he...
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Remind me not to walk outside without my boots. Indiana Jones and I have something in common ... but it ends there, unfortunately.-- SONNET CLV--
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Hi, Jude.I think you've got a perfect Sicilian sonnet here. [Rhyme scheme: abab abab cdc dcd]To great effect the first foot of L1 - a spondee, as I take it:"Six feet of blue-black death --"Great too...
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I forgot to mention the exemplary "turn" this sonnet features! War (the octave) - and peace (the sestet)... Regards, Crispin
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Thanks for reading Sonnet CLV & Crispin, and for your considered comment Crispin.Yes, I am from Australia. This sonnet tells a true story - my companion being the man who, to begin with, wished he...
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Wow, Jude - This is some tightly-packed action sequence....exquisitely woven...a joy to read!Lary
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